I am currently writing a book that involves the military and I want to be as accurate as possible when writing how they speak and act. In one of the scenes this military unit infiltrates a mafia compound. It's a raid, but they are also looking for a specific person who is in fact the main character. So, of the lines I put in there when they found him was "I got my eyes on the subject matching that description now." as if he is talking to someone on a headset that we can't here. In military terms does what I have him say sound right? Also when they have deemed that the main character is not a threat would the say something like "No threat" or something else? Any other pointers or hints would also be appreciated. www.wattpad.com/story/136233864-leaving-darkness This is the link if anybody wants to check it out.
